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  • Narendra 9:25 pm on February 14, 2011 Permalink | Reply
    Tags: , death, , , , smiles   

    A Story 

    I’m not a good story teller like Arvinth however, I thought I should share this short piece.

    This is a story about 2 people, Tony and Jeena.

    It’s a simple story. Tony used all his wits to push her away. He tried everything he could. “Jeena I’m a player, I slept with 6 girls at high school”. “Hey, Jeena, I’m getting married”. “Jeena, I like your friend, Can you introduce me to her”, ” Can you just leave me alone” , ” I don’t want to talk to you, Bye “, “I love drugs” etc etc. He made several attempts to get rid of her but somewhere in his sub-conscious mind he was already sold.

    Jeena was a polite, pretty, calm girl. She never bought any of Tony’s ridiculous over the top excuses, for some reason she blindly trusted her judgement. No one could ever shake her faith in Tony, including herself. As you would expect she kept her cool and showered heaps of love on our hero Tony. Her child like laughter, unconditional love finally brought down the mad man. He said those magic words “Jeena, I love you“. Her joy had no limits, she wanted to fly. For the first time in her 21years of existence she was truly happy. Her voice said it all.

    Even before Tony could start to appreciate her love for him fate struck a major blow. She was diagnosed with a rare form of terminal illness. She was dying. Which apparently was kept under wraps by her parents. However, both Tony and Jeena realized something was terribly wrong. Her health was deteriorating rapidly. Things went bad from there, seriously bad. She was confined to a hospital chamber, inside an sterile zone. Her only source of reaching out Tony was her ever faithful Nokia E71. Meatime, Tony being a mean, ruthless man wanted to get rid of Jeena, Yes! yet again. Actually, he was scared to go through the painful process of loosing his loved one. By then he had figured out that, she would never make it out of the ICU.  He said and did everything he could to destroy her confidence. EVERYTHING.

    But no, there was no way she was going to let go her love for this man. Some strange cosmic force had bonded them into one, she called it ‘Love‘. The more he tried to force her out of his life, the more he fell in love with her. The tussle continued, it reached a point he wished she was dead. His pain pushed him to he edge, his last words, three days before her death ” Go Away”. She was an obedient girl she obliged. She was gone forever, never to come back again, never to trouble him again, never to cry, never to smile. She was dead. End of story? Yes, almost.

    He was trying to hate her so much, he skipped her mails and FB messages for as long as he could remember. On that fateful day, as he came to terms with the most devastating news of his life. He opened her mails.

     

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    More and more I want to forget you
    More and more I want with you forever
    I do not realize when and how all this happened

    I don’t want you to leave me, never leave me alone

    I hope you are here forever, although you may not be my own

    Our love story is beautiful, like paint on a canvas, so many colours, bright and dark. I wish the artist continues to paint more colours into our lives.

    I‘m sure Ill be able to survive, as long as there is a place your heart


    Tony, let me be part of your life.


    God, today I swear to you. He’s the one I love. I will love him till my end, I will love him even when I’m in you arms. I’m sorry I love him as much as I love you. I can’t break my promise I made to myself.

    ****************************************************************

     

    All Tony could do was stare at his screen. He was speechless. As silence gained on him, reality sunk in,She was gone.

     

     

     

     

     

     
    • sufiaz 11:46 pm on February 14, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      valentines day special?

      • Narendra 11:51 pm on February 14, 2011 Permalink | Reply

        Hmmmm, I guess so. I’m not sure. I just wrote it, makes me feel better.

        • sufiaz 1:10 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

          hmmm….
          is it true?

          • Narendra 1:16 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

            Hmmmm 🙂 😦

            • sufiaz 1:25 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

              thats not an answer 😉

              oh u get the torrent i sent?

              • Narendra 1:31 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

                No, I didn’t get any. is it to my yahoo or gmail id? 😦

            • sufiaz 1:33 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

              its the ID u use to comment on my blog? the define one?

              i didnt get a notification so i assume its been delivered?

              • Narendra 1:36 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

                Weird… I didn’t receive it..Can u pls push it to my yahoo id..u can find tht on my FB badge..

            • sufiaz 1:40 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

              sent…..pls check the junk folder as well. yahoos filters r crap.

    • Reno Putri 12:11 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      this is true story?

      • Narendra 12:18 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

        Maybe Yes..Maybe No

        • Reno Putri 12:32 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

          hmmmmm, so touching, speechless poor tony 😥

          • Narendra 12:47 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

            No Reno, he killed her…he’s a murderer. He’s lucky coz there’s no law under which he can be jailed. He’s plain bad.

            • Reno Putri 1:24 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

              i guess hez on self jail forever coz guilty feelings 😦

        • Reno Putri 12:45 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

          i hope this is not ur true story ya….

    • Blockader 12:31 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      Powerful!

    • Leianne 1:35 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      Is Tony, you? 🙂

      • Narendra 1:41 am on February 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

        If it was me..I wouldn’t have named him Tony…I would rather go for Brad Pitt or Edward Cullen…hmmmm

  • Narendra 4:49 pm on January 31, 2011 Permalink | Reply
    Tags: blockader, , Brad, , , , posts, smiles, Tom Cruise, WordPress   

    Must visit, Must read, Must follow 

    Very few connection’s are made out of nowhere and this is one such story.

    Weeks ago I visited daily post blog. I was there to seek inspiration to blog daily. I read through the list of comments and finally stopped at “Blockader” ( means a strategic barrier ). I saw this middle aged man with shabby hair and unkept beard ( By the way, his often mistaken for Tom Cruise, way to go Brad ). For some reason, I left a message showing

    Tom "Brad" Cruise

    Tom "Brad" Cruise

    interest to be his blog buddy. Really, I don’t know why I did that ( Maybe, I should have looked for a pretty girl 😛 ).

     

    Tom Cruise

    Tom Cruise

    I will be honest, the first time I visited his blog, it looked plain uninspiring. On that day he had posted about an Ice hockey game at Church ( You see I’m from India, I neither connect to Church nor Ice hockey, I have never seen snow for that matter ). For a moment I thought I shouldn’t be his WordPress buddy, I can’t relate to his world but you see, some connection’s are made to last and they are completely beyond our control. I resisted my temptation to hit the unsubscribe button. Couple of days later, I was slowly able to grasp his sense of humor ( but yes, still can’t get it all ). Personally, for me happiness is paramount. I woudn’t want to be reading a depressing blog or something filled with cuss words or needless criticism. I love happy blogs and his posts were getting extremely enjoyable. Out went the idea of unbuddying ( Just coined a new word, don’t look up on google, there’s no such word ).

    Few days later Brad came out with what was his shortest post ( guess it has less than 100 words)  but it packed a mighty punch. An honest and sincere post, the essence lies in these closing lines ” But today, if I can make you laugh, and put a smile on your face, then that means the world to me“. Big thumbs up to Brad. From that day, I stopped worrying about the differences in our culture, food or looks ( but hey, I look no less than Tom Cruise ). I could connect to his thoughts, I could relate to his world, I could understand his views. Suddenly I realized, here is a man who writes to spread smiles and that for me is,was and always be the single biggest reason for following his blog.

    Since then I been an avid follower of his posts and due to the time zone thing, I get to comment first, well before his friends. It’s a joy reading his posts, never fails to deliver. As of today his blog is the 6th fastest growing blog on wordpress and his little gem on Jan 21st was featured in Freshly Pressed segment. Extremely happy for Brad. Having said that, even if he wasn’t featured in that list, I would still keep visiting his blog with glee.

    Thank you for all the entertainment. Keep posting Tom “Brad” Cruise.

     

    I strongly recommend his blog, it’s a must visit,must read, must follow – http://www.blockader.wordpress.com

     

     
    • Blockader 6:53 pm on January 31, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      You do realize I only get mistaken for Tom Cruise when I jump on sofas right? 🙂 It may seem a little self-centered, but I am going to click “like this post”. Thanks for the kind words.

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